Feedback

Our feedback showed the following strengths;

• greyscale was effective.
• camera positioning and a good range of shots (including match on action)
  
• font was appropriate to genre.
• music was appropriate to genre of the film.
• uses colour to add emotion - happiness in the past is in full colour whereas the present is in greyscale.
• home video was effective to setting the scene.
• strong storyline.
• good use of various settings.

Our feedback also showed the following weaknesses;

• needed more dramatic music during particular scenes, ie. the drowning scene, to add tension.
• more of a frightened reaction needed during the mirror scene.
• some scenes not fluent with the music, some scenes need more/less tension as appropriate.

Everyone thought our target audience should be 15/16+.

Below is an image of our feedback sheet, which was filled in by our class.