Friday 6 March 2009

Things That Need Changing

Looking at our rough cut over, we have picked up a few things that need changing.

For example the laugh at the beginning, may not make people take us seriously, in a way it seems very sinister, however in another it seems very tacky.

We also think the title appear for too long, its dragging on our piece. We put them over our film, as we feel we need the short breaks, it stops jumps and breaks up the film giving it pace and suspense. Also we added more titles where we felt they were needed.

We are adding some scenes of her leaving the house, and walking back into the house as she appeared in certain places, not linking scenes, therefore making no sense. however this made the film very long so we decided to take out other scenes, the ones of her walking around outside, and some of the camera shots that were shaking and tacky, for example the scene of the jumping back and forth as she walked down a long path.

At the very beginning we added a small clip of a home video of when the main actress was younger, this shows the character when she was happy and this will lure the views into a false sense of security.

Finally we changed the sound track to make the 'Booms' when the titles appear creating a powerful and dramatic effect.

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